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mlai, October 23rd, 2008, 7:41 pm

This page by me. This is the bonus last page of the chapter. I consider this page as #2 of "The Living Sword Fables." #1 would be the 1st 2 pages of this comic. There will probably be several of these through the entirety of this comic, marking the beginning and ending of story arcs. Their meaning is up to you to decide.

By now I should be fluent enough in Middle English, that the writing is easy to read for anyone. I want to point out...
- 'Your' and 'thy' are interchangeable. ME does use 'your' when it is poetic to do so. Hence I use it here for the alliteration of 'y.' This has nothing to do with why Chase never seems to say "thou, thy, thee," etc. (There's a story behind that.)
- The speaker of the last sentence is purposely vague. Either the knight is speaking to her raised sword, or the raised sword is speaking to the knight.

This page is somewhat text heavy, but I hope it's fun to read.

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BJxp, October 24th, 2008, 8:17 am

no really, It feels like if I were reading an acient poem, it's exactly how it goes in my mind, the no-image dialogue, the great scene about to begin and then....the darkness, leaving suspense for all.
it is truly a work of genius

mlai, October 25th, 2008, 8:28 pm

Wow thanks BJxp. It mainly came about because I had an extra panel that I had edited out of the comic (the panel above), but I didn't want to just scrap it. So I figured I'd make some sort of a bonus page using it.

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