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mlai, June 23rd, 2008, 7:27 am


This page by me. This page took a ridiculously long time; I don't know why. I have to start cutting down on the CG... just because I learned more tricks doesn't mean I should be using all of them all the time...

I ran this by a test audience. The biggest problem seems to be panel 5 (the screaming head), in terms of clarity. What I was trying to achieve was... that panel depicts a quick/sudden flashback in Nuada's head. It might have been more understandable if I put it inside a panel, but I was trying something... trying to make the centipedes partially continuous with panel 5, to show that it is all a continuation of Nuada's thoughts/feelings.

One of the hardest things with this chapter (and half of the last one) is that it's all Nuada; every panel is Nuada. I try hard to mix it up, so that I don't have to draw his face every single panel... But at the same time, his emotions are the centerpiece of the events so I have to draw his face a lot. Argh.

FIGHT_1 is the companion story to this one. The 2 stories occur in the same world.
http://fight1.smackjeeves.com




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mlai, June 25th, 2008, 6:16 pm


ROFL you just gave me an absurd mental image.




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BJxp, June 24th, 2008, 4:39 pm


please, PLEASE, tell me his arm is not going to merge with a human being.... I mean, wath's gonna come out of THAT? a really smexy arm that no one understands beacause it's too cultural to even speak prperly?


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